The graph shows the number of visitors to a variety of art galleries in 2011. Summarize the information by selecting and repo fling the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
A glance at the figure provides information about the sum of
visitors
to a variety of art galleries in 2011. Among six museums, The Louvre in France was the most visited museum
in 2011, and The State Hermitage in Russia was the least visited in 2011.
The Number of Visitors
alike The National Museum
, The Museo Del Prado, and The State Hermitage was 3 million
people. Furthermore
, The Metropolitan Museum
in the USA and The British Museum
in the UK were visited by approximately 6 million
people. The number of visitors
to The Louvre in France was quite the highest among the other museums with 8 million
people. However
, The comparison between the most visited museum
with the least visited museum
was doubled, and the deviation between the most visited museum
with the average number of visitors
was roughly 2 million
. This
deviation was lower than the deviation between the lowest-visited Museum
and the middle-visited Museum
.Submitted by rose on
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