You have moved to another city but your bank has your old address and continues to send all communication there. Write a letter to your bank branch. In the letter, mention: •Where have you moved? •What problem are you facing regarding the bank’s communication? •What you want them to do regarding old communication already sent to the wrong address.

Dear Sir/Madam , I hope
finds
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find
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this
letter well. I am writing
this
letter to inform you that I am a member of the
bank
I
change
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changed
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of residental address
since
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in
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January 2023 which was located in London I moved to
North
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the North
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of London I
have forgotten
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forgot
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to update the
bank
about
this
situation. I hope you
are understanding
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understand
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with current situation all
confidental
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confidential
documents have been submitted previous residence and I need to sign on
credit
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my credit
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cards and my statements for 4 months . I already check with
bank
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the bank
a bank
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I did not receive
documents
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the documents
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as they told me sent
it
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them
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to
previous
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my previous
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residence I request you to carry out
for
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apply
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this
matter as soon as possible
according to
this
situation I am unable to pay my credit card bill if I do not pay during
this
month they will take action immediately
therefore
, consider my current residence address as I changed it on
bank
application. I would
apprecaite
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appreciate
it if you re-send confidential documents to
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the cureent
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cureent addres
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current address
to pay my previous bills. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Best regards,
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coherence cohesion
Ensure that you divide the content into clear paragraphs, each addressing a distinct aspect of the task. Use connectors appropriately to improve the flow of your ideas.
task achievement
Begin with a proper and clear introduction stating the purpose of your letter. Make sure to address all three points outlined in the task with specific details.
lexical resource
Use a range of vocabulary suitable for formal letter-writing without heavy repetition of words.
grammatical range
Work on sentence structure and punctuation to avoid run-on sentences and increase the clarity and precision of your writing.

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