You have moved to another city but your bank has your old address and continues to send all communication there. Write a letter to your bank branch. In the letter, mention: •Where have you moved? •What problem are you facing regarding the bank’s communication? •What you want them to do regarding old communication already sent to the wrong address.

#city #bank #address #communication #branch #•where #•what #bank’s

Dear Sir/Madam , I hope

finds

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find

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this

letter well. I am writing

this

letter to inform you that I am a member of the

bank

change

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changed

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of residental address

since

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January 2023 which was located in London I moved to

North

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the North

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of London I

have forgotten

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forgot

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to update the

bank

about

this

situation. I hope you

are understanding

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understand

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with current situation all

confidental

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confidential

documents have been submitted previous residence and I need to sign on

credit

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my credit

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cards and my statements for 4 months . I already check with

bank

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the bank

a bank

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I did not receive

documents

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the documents

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as they told me sent

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them

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my previous

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residence I request you to carry out

for

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apply

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this

matter as soon as possible

according to

this

situation I am unable to pay my credit card bill if I do not pay during

this

month they will take action immediately

therefore

, consider my current residence address as I changed it on

bank

application. I would

apprecaite

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appreciate

it if you re-send confidential documents to

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the cureent

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cureent addres

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current address

to pay my previous bills. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Best regards,

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coherence cohesion

Ensure that you divide the content into clear paragraphs, each addressing a distinct aspect of the task. Use connectors appropriately to improve the flow of your ideas.

task achievement

Begin with a proper and clear introduction stating the purpose of your letter. Make sure to address all three points outlined in the task with specific details.

lexical resource

Use a range of vocabulary suitable for formal letter-writing without heavy repetition of words.

grammatical range

Work on sentence structure and punctuation to avoid run-on sentences and increase the clarity and precision of your writing.

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3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
16Grammar mistakes
 

6 paragraphs

184 words

4.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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