Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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The majority of people who

lived

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in foreign states experience issues in making friends. The cause of

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language

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the language

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barier

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barrier

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, which I totally agree and

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essay will explain the reasons.

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with, moving to a new state which

use

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different

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a different

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language is quite challenging and

need

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extra

efforts

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, nowadays technological advance allows us to learn new language easily, it requires a lot of

practices

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practice

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, when

American

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move to Spain, they might already

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basic terms and

vocabularies

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, but they are not familiar with the accent.

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will hinder them

communicate

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from communicating

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with locals, especially when they want to

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buy

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groceries, or ask about public

transportations

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transportation

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, international citizens tend to feel lonely and left out as they are different. Joining communities or socialization is hard when we fail to understand them when they talk casually.

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will be a huge obstacle for students,

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, because they will barely included by the locals in either academic or non-academic activities.

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, it can

leads

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to lonely and depression since surviving in living abroad is give a lot of pressure. In conclusion, I firmly

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that there are several main struggles

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individuals

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lack of ability

in speaking

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to speak

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with locals.

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will affect not only their daily basis

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but

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their happiness.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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216 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

linguistic proficiency
cross-cultural communication
miscommunication
social integration
linguistic alienation
cultural dissonance
language acquisition
communication breakdown
interpreter services
language courses
bilingualism
multilingualism
language barrier
effective communication
cultural assimilation

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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

Some teachers say students should be organised into groups to study. Others argue students should be made to study alone. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In many countries, people have health problems because they chose to live an unhealthy lifestyle. What are the reasons and solutions?

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The top priority of businesses is making money, and they do not need to have social responsibilities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

What do you think are the causes of this? What can be done to draw people's attention to art? The government's investment in arts, music and theatre is a waste of money. Governments should invest these funds in public services instead.