The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.
The chart illustrates how many holidaymakers arrived on the
Caribbean
island
between 2010 and 2017.
Overall
, there was an increase in the total number
of visitors to the Caribbean
island
, which was the result of growth in the number
of tourists staying on cruise ships and staying on island
Correct article usage
the island
ones
. Correct pronoun usage
apply
In addition
, the number
of holidaymakers choosing cruise ship
saw a development, becoming the choice of most Fix the agreement mistake
ships
people
visiting Caribbean
island
from 2016 onwards.
Just 1 Fix the agreement mistake
islands
million
total visitors visited this
island
in 2010, with a significant rise to 3,5 million
visitors at the end
of the period. Meanwhile, the number
of tourists staying on cruise ships increased steadily from about 0,3 million
people
to exactly 2 million
people
in 2017.
The number
of people
visiting Caribbean
island
and staying there hovered around 0,3 Fix the agreement mistake
islands
million
people
in 1 first year, before fluctuating and ending at 1,5 million
people
in 2017.Submitted by phuongdong.nguyentran on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words caribbean, island, number, people, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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