The diagram shows the process of water treatment
The diagram illustrates how the
water
is prepared for drinking and household usage.
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Overall
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water
treatment has 10 stages. Starting from intake of Use synonyms
water
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then
it goes to different processing like settling in the basin, adding chlorine and disinfecting and Linking Words
finally
to the faucet.
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water
is collected from a natural resource. Use synonyms
Then
it passes to a pump and undergoes a machine process. Afterwards, the Linking Words
water
goes through a mixing method called flash mix from there, the oxidants and polyaluminum chloride mix into the Use synonyms
water
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Next,
the flocculation procedure takes place followed by Linking Words
water
settling in a basin to collect the impurities down to the basin.
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Subsequently
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water
enters a big box which has chlorine in it and Use synonyms
then
, it flows through a pipe for filter procedure in a filter membrane. Linking Words
After
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this
step, the Linking Words
water
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then
comes to another container called disinfection, there the disinfecting procedure takes place with other products namely, lime, chlorine and fluoride. In the next stage, the Linking Words
water
passes to another pump and Use synonyms
finally
, it is ready in the faucet for people to use it.Linking Words
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