The table shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished.The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visits during the same two periods.
The table illustrates the rate of
visitors
that visited during the year before and the year after Ashdown Museum
was refurbished, while
the pie charts present the satisfaction of visitors
when they visited the museum
at two different times.
Overall
, the number of visitors
rose after the museum
was refurbished. Before refurbishing, most of the visitors
were not satisfied with the museum
, but they changed their moods to satisfied after the refurbishment.
Regarding the table, the rate of tourists was 74,000 people before the museum
was refurbished, then
increased to 92,000 touristsSubmitted by s_syedy on
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