The accelerated increase of elderly
people
is believed to be beneficial for enterprises and society,
whereas
other
people
have opposite views. In my opinion, despite having both props and corns, the risks of
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population
outperform its benefits.
There are a variety of reasons to prevent that phenomenon.
Firstly
, the proliferation of individuals above 65 years old may put more pressure on the
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, especially those developing ones. Since governmental budget need to be allocated more
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health services for
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as well as
welfare which may not only affect detrimentally on a thriving
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but
also
deter the
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of other types of infrastructures
such
as industrial plant or traffic foundation facilities. To illustrate, to address
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population
, twenty-three projects associated
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national defence and industry were postponed in Japan in 2021;
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budget,
instead
, was spent on increasing welfare and hospital services.
Consequently
, it may put those undeveloped
countries
into a dilemma between
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elderly
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life
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and prioritising
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growth.
Secondly
, the shortage of labour
force
may be ascribed to the rise of
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.
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high percentage of retired workers
along with
nurses serving them may lead to the lack of labour
force
in other
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fields
such
as technology, heavy industry,
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, …
For example
,
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and Western
countries
38 percent of
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aged above 65 have lowered immigrated condition because of serious shortage of workers in these
countries
.
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,
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population
is apparent to be a culprit for the lack of
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force
.
However
,
this
trend still has some advantages. The most noticeable influence is that
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population
might be a springboard for higher
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for the elderly. It is because,
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ignorance
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poor facilities and services for old
people
is prevalent
due to
the concentration of some nations, especially the developing ones on the growth of
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and technology.
As a result
, the high percentage of elderly
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with international agreements (Universal Declaration of Human Rights) may
force
authorities to increase elderly life
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.
For instance
, the Indian government promised to spend 5 billion
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on the system of
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last
year.
In conclusion, despite the chances to improve healthcare facilities,
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population
might influence adversely on national
economy
, especially the undeveloped
countries
.