The diagram below shows how solar panels can be used to provide electricity for domestic use. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.

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diagram shows how

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the use

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use

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sun

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of sun

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energy

produed

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produces

electricity

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into

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home

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. It is

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clear

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5 parts: solar panels, inverter, electrical panel,

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meter and

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grid.

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, we put solar

panel

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panels

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house

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roof.

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, the sunlight absorbs and

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it into DC current.

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the DC

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current

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inverter

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located in the well to

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the

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and production.

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, the electrical panel

tke

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takes

the AC current and

distibates

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distributes

dissipates

the

electricity

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to our home.

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, any excess solar

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will flow

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back

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to the

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guide

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through

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meter.

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the

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grid was

provide

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excess

electricit

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electricity

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, the home is ready to use

electricity

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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.

Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.

Vocabulary: Replace the words electricity, utility with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

127 words

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