The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in English and Wales between 1918 and 2011.

The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in English and Wales between 1918 and 2011.
The chart describes the information about two types of housing in England and Wales from the years 1918 to 2011.
Overall
, rented housing showed a downward trend,
while
owned accommodation experienced an upward trend throughout the
period
.
However
,
both
properties had some fluctuations as well. In
both
countries, people who owned property had the lowest compared to the following years, which is recorded at around 25%.
However
, the number started to grow in the following
period
, but during the 1939-1953
period
it remained at about 32% and from 1961 onward gradually increased up to almost 70%.
However
, in 2011 it had a slight fall of approximately 5%.
In contrast
, renting accommodation was at almost 80% in 1918 and became around 35%
at the end
of the
period
.
Therefore
, in
both
places
this
type of housing became unpopular but, in 1971 there was a tie between
both
types at almost 50%
then
, it slowly decreased to about 30%. Even though, it had slightly risen approximately 6%
at the end
of the year.
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