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The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features，and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features，and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar graph below displays the results obtained
in
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 a questionnaire about the habits of drinking
coffee
 and tea in some Australian
cities
.
Overall
, the largest tendency in all five
cities
were
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 buying
coffee
 and tea in a café,
while
 fewer
people
 bought fresh
coffe
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coffee
. The number of
people
 buying instant
coffee
 is similar in all
cities
. Melbourne has the largest amount of
people
 going to a café for a
coffee
 or tea in the
last
 4 weeks, with a percentage of approximately 64%, followed by
Hobarty
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Hobart
 with 62.5% and
then
 Sydney with 61%. Just over 55% of
people
 went to a café in Brisbane and just under 50% in Adelaide. The number of
people
 buying fresh
coffee
 in Sydney and Melbourne
were
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 between 40% and 45%, and in Hobarts there were approximately 38% of
people
 buying fresh
coffee
. Both Brisbane and Adelaide had just under 35% of
people
 buying fresh
coffee
.
Furthermore
, almost 55% of
people
 in Hobart bought instant
coffee
 and 52,5% in Brisbane,
the
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 other three
cities
 the percentage of
people
 consuming instant
coffee
were
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was
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 between 45 and 50%.
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