Multinational companies are becoming increasingly common in developing countries. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

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Multinational organizations are growing day by day in developing

countries

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essay will suggest that increasing multinational corporations has great advantages like creating employment in the locality and

overall

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economic growth of the country

while

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the disadvantages are environmental

pollution

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and dominant

government

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when making policies. The main

advantages

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advantage

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phenomenon is

craeting

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creating

employment opportunities in society. Most developing country has

high

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a high

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rate of unemployment.

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this

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reason, the crime rates are high,

security

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and security

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and armed forces fall

trouble

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into trouble

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. So, multinational companies help to keep peace in

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apply

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society by creating many job opportunities.

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, by paying

tax

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taxes

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, a

company

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contributes to a

countriies

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country's

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ovelall

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overall

economical

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economic

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growth. Most

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apply

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the

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apply

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multinational

corporation

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corporations

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paid two third

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pay two-thirds

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of a

contries

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countries

country's

GDP.

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fOR

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INSTANCE,

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BANGLADESH ,

mobile

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a mobile

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company

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cigarate

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cigarette

company

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paid 45% TAX AND THE

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AMOUNT WAS 5% of

total

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the total

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GDP. Despite these

advantages

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advantages,

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there are a few disadvantages too.

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, multinational companies are responsible for environmental

pollution

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. They intended to use toxic material and

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not maintain

code

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the code

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of sewerage.

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why,

the

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apply

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environment

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environmental

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pollution

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are

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in severe condition in developing

countries

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, Delhi the capital city of India is

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1 polluted city in the world,

due to

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over

development

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overdevelopment

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of many multinationals.

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, many companies help to dominate the

government

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.So, the

government

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make policy in

favor

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favour

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of them.

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Modi

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the Modi

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brothers influenced

south

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African

authority

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authorities

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to make

tax

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free business policy. Despite

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policy is deleterious for

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the south

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south

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African

government

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. In conclusion,

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a Multinational

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Multinational

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a Multinational

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company

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a must

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must

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a must

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for developing

countries

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because

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they

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helps

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help

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country's

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countries

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country's

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overall

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economic

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economical

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economic

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development and

reduce

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reduces

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unemployment.

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, for

pollution

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and making ineffective

policies

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policies,

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these

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company

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companies

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are responsible.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

280 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Globalization
Multinational corporations (MNCs)
Foreign direct investment (FDI)
Developing economies
Infrastructure development
Capacity building
Cultural diversity
Sustainability
Corporate social responsibility (CSR)
Technological transfer
Economic disparity
Market saturation
Brain drain
Indigenous industries
Expatriate management
Trade imbalance

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