The given table provides vital data about the amount of fast food consumed in Melbourne from 2005 to the present time and predictions for the near future.

The given table provides vital data about the amount of fast food consumed in Melbourne from 2005 to the present time and predictions for the near future.
The table gives information on the quantity of fast food consumed in Melbourne from 2005 to the current period and proposed changes expected to be made to
this
amount in 2025.
Overall
, all of the nutritional options will experience an increase in consumption in the
forseeable
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foreseeable
future as Hamburger is estimated to be the most eaten food in the city
while
noodles and fried rice will be the least consumed. Hamburgers which started at 40
units
in 2005 ,will be the most ordered of all options at 51
units
in 2005
similarly
, Fried Chicken which is presently in demand at 37
units
, will reach 45
units
.
Although
,
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Salads were almost never considered an alternative in 2005 at 5
units
, they will soon become a common order among Australians in 2025 at 41
units
.
While
the same
units
of Fried rice will be purchased from now till 2025 (9
units
), the quantity of noodles is expected to rise by only a
percent
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per cent
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from 8 to 9
units
.
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