The chart below shows the foreign visitor numbers in 3 Vietnamese resorts from 2000 to 2006.
The given graph illustrates the amount of
visitors
from foreign countries in
3 resorts in Vietnam between 2000 and 2006.
Change preposition
to
Overall
, it can be seen that Phu Quoc and Mui Ne was on a general upward trend whereas
the other resort experienced a slight downward trends
during the timeframe. Correct the article-noun agreement
a slight downward trend
slight downward trends
Additionally
, although
Danang had the most visitors
at the beginning, it was replaced by Mui Ne at the end
of the period.
Looking at the figures in further
detail, it can be noticed that in 2000 Danang had the highest number of visitors
at 900 000, before decreasing significantly to 630 000 in 2002 . After that
it kept going down dramatically to 500 000 and just under 360 000 in 2004, Add a comma
that,
2006
, respectively.
Returning to the remaining Correct word choice
and 2006
statics
, it can be observed that Phu Quoc had 500 000 Correct your spelling
statistics
visitors
in 2000, then
rose slightly to 600 000. After increasing to more than 610 000 in 2006, it was
witnessed a slow fall to approximately 480 000. Unnecessary verb
apply
Similarly
, Mui Ne had the lowest point at 300 000 visitors
then
went up to 400 000 in the following year. This
figure was to continue for the rest of the given period, at more than 710 000 in 2004, followed by a more significant rise to an all-time-high
of 920 000 in 2006.Correct your spelling
all-time high
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