The graph below shows the changes in production (millions) of three products in a garment factory from 1990 to 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The graph below shows the changes in production (millions) of three products in a garment factory from 1990 to 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
the graph provides information containing the changes in how much clothing
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was exports
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exports
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in three countries
during
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from
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1999 to 2003. generally speaking, the movement of clothes
sales
in each country shows different
movement
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movements
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. In
Colombia
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Colombia,
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the clothes trading increased when in Japan it's
slighly
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slightly
decreasing and in Myanmar shows
a fluctuating trends
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a fluctuating trend
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.
In
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the beginning of
period
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the period
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, there
is
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was
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no production
in
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of
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clothes in Myanmar, but
then
it
rocket
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rocketed
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to 800
millions
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million
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of
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apply
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dollars
in one year and
reach
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reached
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the
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a
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peak just above 900
millons
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million
of
dollars
a year later, but unfortunately it suddenly dropped nearly to 350
millions
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million
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dollars
in the next one year. after that, the
sales
in Myanmar
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began
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begin
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begin to
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rise
continously
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continuously
until the end of
period
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the period
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, but not as
signifact
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significantly
as
in
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at
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the start. That's clear from the data that
sales
in Colombia
was
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were
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already high in 1999, nearly 450
millions
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million
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dollars
. and it
continues
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continued
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rose to 700
millions
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million
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dollars
in 3 years, but
then
it
suddently
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suddenly
drop
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drops
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to 600
millions
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million
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dollars
in 2003.
Besides
,
the
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apply
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Japan's
sales
also
shows
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show
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a
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the
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highest amount of
dollars
in
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at
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the beginning of
period
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the period
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amongst
among
amongs
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among
other countries,much above 500
millions
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million
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dollars
, but
it
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at
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the end of
period
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the period
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it drop just
bellow
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below
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500
millions
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million
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dollars
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Vocabulary: The word "drop" was used 2 times.
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