The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country betweeen 2011 and 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the mian feartures, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given line graphs provide data on the
number
of closed and the new-opened stores over a period of 7 years.
Overall
, at the beginning of the period, the number
of shop closures had the highest level, while
the lowest number
of that
happened Correct pronoun usage
them
atthe
end of the period. Correct your spelling
at the
By contrast
, in 2013 and 2015 the largest and lowest number
of shop closures experienced
.
Add a missing verb
were experienced
According to
the diagram, decpite
all fluctuations, the Correct your spelling
despite
number
of openning
stores had a significant decrease from 2011 to 2018. In 2011, the Correct your spelling
opening
number
of open-stores
Correct your spelling
open stores
were
about 8500 and in 2012 it declined to below 4000 Change the verb form
was
shops
. Then
from 2012 until 2014
there was a growth in the Add a comma
2014,
number
of open shops
, but in the following years from 2014 to 2018 the related diagram fall
gradually and reached 3000 opening Replace the word
fell
store
.
The figure related to the shop closures Fix the agreement mistake
stores
also
experienced a slight decline compare
to the first year. The Change the form of the verb
compared
number
of closing shops
were
about 6300 in the first year and had a dramatic decrease until 2015, Correct subject-verb agreement
was
then
the downward trend broke and grown
remarkably until 2018 and reached around 5100 closing Wrong verb form
grew
shops
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