The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.

The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.
the two diagrams give us information about an
island
, before and after
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the addtion
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addtion
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addition
adding
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of
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some facilities .
overall
,it can be seen that the noticeable changes
is
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are
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in the replacement of housing ,
also
the infrastructure of the city
have
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has
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been developed. regards to the main change
that
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apply
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is in the accommodation,
befor
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the
island
is lack of houses ,
however
after construction , they full of villas for holiday-makers , there are a lot of houses that
they
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apply
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are located in the middle of
island
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the island
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on both
side
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sides
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moreover
, all houses are connecting by foot path. refers to other facilities namely ,
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a
the
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restaurant
where
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which
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is located on the top of the map ,
as well as
they have got reception
that is
in
the
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in front of the restaurant ,
in addition
, when travelers are arriving to
island
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the island
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they
shoud
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should
use
vehicle
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a vehicle
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track to get reception and restaurant.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "that is".
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words island with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • island
  • before and after
  • construction
  • tourist facilities
  • maps
  • changes
  • comparison
  • description
  • implications
  • personal opinion
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