The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.
the two diagrams give us information about an some facilities .
restaurant
island
, before and after Correct article usage
the addtion
addtion
Correct your spelling
addition
adding
Change preposition
of
overall
,it can be seen that the noticeable changes is
in the replacement of housing ,Change the verb form
are
also
the infrastructure of the city have
been developed.
regards to the main change Correct subject-verb agreement
has
that
is in the accommodation,Correct pronoun usage
apply
befor
Correct your spelling
the
island
is lack of houses ,however
after construction , they full of villas for holiday-makers , there are a lot of houses that they
are located in the middle of Correct pronoun usage
apply
island
on both Add an article
the island
side
Change to a plural noun
sides
moreover
, all houses are connecting by foot path.
refers to other facilities namely ,Add an article
a
the
where
is located on the top of the map , Correct word choice
which
as well as
they have got reception that is
in the
in front of the restaurant ,Correct article usage
apply
in addition
, when travelers are arriving to island
they Add an article
the island
shoud
use Correct your spelling
should
vehicle
track to get reception and restaurant.Correct article usage
a vehicle
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "that is".
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words island with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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