The table below presents the number of children ever born to women aged 40-44 years in Australia for each year the information was collected since 1981.

The table below presents the number of children ever born to women aged 40-44 years in Australia for each year the information was collected since 1981.
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The above table illustrates data from more than two decades, with regard to the birth percentage of
women
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in the age of early 40s in Australia.
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,
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with zero
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have gradually increased,
while
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gradually reducing the percentage of having more than 2
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over the years.
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with, in the early 80's, more than 25% of
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in age between 40-42 had an average of more than 2
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. In 1981, the percentage of childless
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ratio was 8.5%,
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in 2006,
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with no
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increased by 15.9%.
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, mothers with at least 1 child (7.6% to 12.3%) or 2
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(29%-38.3%) have rapidly grown by the year 2006.
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,
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with 4 or more
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have gradually declined over the time period (27.6% to 11%).
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, from 1981 to 2006, the number of 3
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ever born to 40-42 years
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women
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slightly reduced from 27.4% to 21.5% by the end of 2006.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words women, children with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • fertility rate
  • demographic shift
  • age cohort
  • workforce implications
  • government policy
  • birth rate fluctuations
  • education level
  • career advancement
  • reproductive health
  • family planning
  • socio-economic factors
  • population pyramid
  • life expectancy
  • childbearing age
  • maternity leave
  • contraceptive methods
  • population growth rate
  • average family size
  • maternal health
  • census data
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