The table below presents the number of children ever born to women aged 40-44 years in Australia for each year the information was collected since 1981.
The table shows the number of
children
they have when women are aged 40-44 years
old in Australia over a 35-
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35-year
years
period.
Overall
, it is true that most of
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apply
families
have up to two
kids
. While
having more than two
children
is
popular before but has decreased over the Wrong verb form
was
years
.
In 1981, when women aged 40-44 years
old, they used to have two
or more children
in their home, being two
children
the highest percentage with 29%. Very few families
have one or none
child, with 7.6 % and 8.5% of the total, respectively.
Over the Correct quantifier usage
no
35-
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35-year
years
period, most of the families
have up to 2 children
at their home, so we can see a
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an
increasce
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increase
of
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in
children
's figures during the period studied. Families
with two
kids
has
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have
rosen
to 38.3% in 2006, Correct your spelling
rose
in addition
to 15.9% with none
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no
descedants
and 13.2% with one child. Correct your spelling
descendants
However
, people trend
to not Correct your spelling
tend
having
more than Wrong verb form
have
two
children
over the years
, so the percentages have dropped down, being 21.5% with three kids
and 11% with four or more kids
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