The chart below shows information about changes in average house prices in five different cities between 1990 and 2002 compared with the average house prices in 1989. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram below illustrates information on the average residential building pricing in five
cities
on
the span between 1990 and 2002 compared to the pricing in 1989. Change preposition
in
Overall
, it can be seen that the deviation of the two different periods of time in comparison to the
1989 showed a different pattern. The Change the article
apply
period
of
1990 to 1995 showed a negative trend of deviation in the majority of the Change preposition
from
cities
, while
the 1996 to 2002 showed the opposite, where the period
experienced a positive trend in almost all of the cities
.
For the case of the 1990 to 1995 period
, the pricing level
are
generally lower in comparison to how it was in 1989 for New York, Tokyo, and London with an average decline rate of around 5-7%. Change the verb form
is
Although
a different result was experienced for Madrid and Frankfurt housing Correct word choice
However
price
, which showed a slight rise of approximately 2% in comparison to Fix the agreement mistake
prices
1989
pricing Correct article usage
the 1989
level
.
On the other hand
, the 1996 to 2002 period
experienced a surge of
Change preposition
in
housing
price Add an article
the housing
level
from Fix the agreement mistake
levels
the
1989 in almost all of the Change the article
apply
cities
except Tokyo which is still lower on
a -5% rate. The most apparent and noticeable surge Change preposition
at
of
price is Change preposition
in
showed
by London with a massive rate of 12% increase. Other Wrong verb form
shown
cities
which are New York and Madrid also
experienced a less drastic surge on the level
of around 5% increase. Lastly
, house pricing located in Frankfurt mainly stayed the same with only a deviation of approximately 1%.Submitted by febrinhidayat on
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words cities, period, level with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "comparison" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "surge" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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