The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features，and make comparisons where relevant. The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features，and make comparisons where relevant.
The line chart illustrates the number of tourists who
traveled
to a special Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.
Change the spelling
travelled
Overall
, the total number of visitors
increased from 2010 to 2017. In the period between 2010 and 2012, a rapid increase can be seen. Then
it increased gradually up until 2015. Dreastic
climbing can be observed in the 2016 and 2017 periods.
Correct your spelling
Drastic
To begin
, visitors
who stayed on the island remained the same until 2011. After that, a significant increase took place up until 2013. It had 2 million visitors
. Then
amount of visitors
count
steady Verb problem
is
as
Change preposition
for up
upto
2 years. Correct your spelling
to
However
, a drop occurred in 2016. Ultimately, a
number of tourists began to climb up.
Correct article usage
the
Further
, for visitors
who stay on cruise ships, a gradual growth can be observed at 0.5 million. Even though a drop occurred in 2015 up to the initial level, a significant escalation occurred within the next 5 years.Submitted by shanikamaduri on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words visitors with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "drop" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stayed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
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