You have recently come back from an overseas holiday. You face some problems with the hotel booked through your travel agent. Write a letter to your travel agent. In your letter • Details about hotel booking • Problems that you faced there • Gives the distance to the travel agent so that such problems are not repeated
Dear Mr. Palitha,
I hope you are in sound health and doing well. I am
writting
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writing
this
letter to you to inform about
the problems I faced in Royal Tulip Correct pronoun usage
you about
Hotel
while
I was travelled
in India for Wrong verb form
travelling
7-days
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7 days
along with
my family members.
As far as I am concerned, your company has been providing excellent services related to travelling in
overseas. Based on Change preposition
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this
information, I had communicated with your agency with a view to booking hotel
near Add an article
a hotel
at
Agra Tajmahal in India.
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According to
our requirement
, you have booked Fix the agreement mistake
requirements
the
one double-bed room in Correct article usage
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the Royal
Hotel
near at
Agra for the whole trip. But it is a matter of sorrow that we had faced several issues in Change preposition
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this
hotel
such
as poor room services, and unheigenic
food etc.
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unhygienic
In addition
to that the most important problems
we Fix the agreement mistake
problem
had
faced Unnecessary verb
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in
there Change preposition
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is about
the Verb problem
was
hotel
distance which is very far away from the Agra Tajmahal. It took almost one and half
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a half
hour
to reach the Tajmahal from the Fix the agreement mistake
hours
hotel
.
Considering the above-mentioned information, we will be
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anticipating
that Wrong verb form
anticipate
this
type of issues
must be considered in future Fix the agreement mistake
issue
while
any tourist is interested Correct word choice
when
to get
any services from your esteemed travel agency, especially Change preposition
in getting
about
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regarding
hotel
distance from targeted
destination.
Yours faithfully,
FaisalCorrect article usage
the targeted
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coherence cohesion
Ensure each paragraph focuses on a single idea for clearer understanding. Avoid blending different complaints or topics within the same paragraph.
task achievement
Your task response could be improved by offering more detailed descriptions of the problems faced and possibly suggestions for compensation or corrective actions you would like the agency to consider.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite