In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think this a positive or negative thing?
At present, suburb dwellers in some nations around the world, are relocating to towns looking for
searching
jobs and better lives, Verb problem
apply
however
, the rural society left
with fewer people.Personally, I believe that others are benefiting from working and Add a missing verb
is left
also
enjoying their lives in urban areas.
First of all, humans who staying
in villages Wrong verb form
stay
are facing
Wrong verb form
face
a
challenge of Correct article usage
the
lack
of Correct article usage
a lack
works
in their community area, Fix the agreement mistake
work
therefore
, this
demands them to move to town in search of greener pastures and money.Moreso, they are working to get capital to support their families through paying them tutions
, bills and Correct your spelling
tuition
also
buying food.An example to illustrate that could be my native country, larger
population is now dwelling in cities Correct article usage
a larger
due to
plenty of piecework and they receiving good salaries.Furthermore
, sometimes in urban areas, people can
prefer to walk to the CBD Verb problem
apply
doing
some activities and in comparison, Change the verb form
to do
to
those who travel from Change preposition
apply
countryside
need transport to and from their places.Correct article usage
the countryside
Hence
, it is clear that
urban family
can Fix the agreement mistake
families
saves
transportation costs and use it for other purposes.
Change the verb form
save
Moreover
, life in urban areas it's fast, easy and better as compared to village lives
.Human beings in towns are easily accessible to many important things Fix the agreement mistake
life
such
as banks and government offices and it can be exemplified with
those in my home city, it's rare to find a bank in Change preposition
by
rurals
but in Central Business District, there Correct your spelling
rural
is
lots of them which means all those who stay in cities can get their pensions and withdraw their money as soon as they can.Change the verb form
are
This
also
can explains
the positive achievements of Change the verb form
explain
such
families being in urban centres, since they are close to variety
of things.
Add an article
a variety
To conclude
, I definitely believe that living in town can be an added advantage to the
society, Correct article usage
apply
hence
it will be easier to make money and get access to everything.Submitted by cajaah93 on
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