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The table shows the passenger and aircraft movements for last year at Singapore Changi Airport. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table shows the passenger and aircraft movements for last year at Singapore Changi Airport. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The provided table chart describes the number of commuters
along with
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airplane
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aeroplane
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movements
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 in the previous year
in
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at
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 Singapore Changi
airport
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Airport
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.
According to
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 the data, there were two categories: passenger traffic,
as well as
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, aircraft
movements
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.
Overall
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, after a thorough analysis of the given graph, it can be plainly viewed that
while
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 the number of travellers experienced a significant increase compared to the
last
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 year, aircraft
movements
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,
on the other hand
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, witnessed a dramatic plummet. In the beginning,
regarding
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the figure for passengers, went through multiple fluctuations over a span of 12 months. In January, the number of commuters sharply increased and scored 4,986,764 million passengers, before hitting a free fall to 4,109,038 in the next month.
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, in October, the
quantity
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 of commuters witnessed a moderate upsurge and registered 4,490,180, after it was only 4,256,299 million passengers in September.
Moreover
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, moving to aeroplane
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, over the period, the figure for aircraft
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 underwent a dramatic plunge. In January, the quantity of airplane
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 was 30,353, before undergoing a rapid decrease to 29,141 in March.
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, it is worth noticing that by the end of that year and particularly in November and December the figure for
airplane
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aeroplane
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movements
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 was
further
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 reduced to 28,031 and 29,711 , respectively.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 80%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words movements with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "dramatic" was used 2 times.
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