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some people agree with spending lots of money on a large wedding while other think it is a wastage of time what is our opinion

#people #lots #money #wastage #time
People
 are divided in their opinion regarding lavish spending on
weddings
. some
people
 believe it is a once-in-a-lifetime occasion and
people
 should use whatever means to make it as opalescent as possible.
In contrast
, others consider it as a needless extravagance. I strongly disagree with the idea of spending a large amount of
money
 on
weddings
.
Firstly
,
weddings
 are only a
begining
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beginning
, after tying the knot
people
 need to save
money
 and plan for the future. They need to buy a nice home,
a
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and a
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car, and plan for a future baby. So
instead
 of spending the
money
 on
weddings
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weddings,
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 they can invest those
money
 to secure their future.
Secondly
, large
wedding
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weddings
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 are bad for the environment by creating large amounts of waste. In many
weddings
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weddings,
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 food
are
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is
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 prepared in large quantities and most often
they
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it
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 goes to the dump. The plastic and other non-recyclable waste created by
wedding
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weddings
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 are
also
 a big risk to the environment.
Finally
,
people
 spend on big
weddings
due to
socital
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societal
social
 pressure, by taking loans and
many a times
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many times
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 plunch themselves
in
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into
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a
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apply
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unnecessary debt. Many
needs
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need
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 to work for years to decades to pay back
this
 debt. In conclusion, expensive
weddings
 are bad for the pocket
as well as
 for the planet
earth
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Earth
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.
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Ensure clarity and precision in articulating your arguments while avoiding overly generalized statements. Provide more granular examples or statistics to support your points.
coherence cohesion
Work on the logical progression of your ideas ensuring that paragraphs segue smoothly from one to the next. Use cohesive devices effectively to bind the essay.

Fully explain your ideas

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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • extravagance
  • financial strain
  • nuptial
  • matrimony
  • opulence
  • frugality
  • sustainability
  • intimacy
  • lavish
  • commemorate
  • milestone
  • festivities
  • budgeting
  • investment
  • societal norms
  • materialistic
  • minimalism
  • consumerism
  • practical considerations
  • economic implications
  • memory-making
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