An increasing number of children are overweight which could result many problems when they grow older both in terms of their health and healtg care costs. Why do you think so many children are overweight? What could be done to solve this problem?

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adolescents

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many issues in their future in terms of health problems and health care costs. In my opinion,

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habits and lack of exercise are major reasons behind

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obesity. In

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junk foods rather than

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meals at home.

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parents

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parents who

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less than 15 years old kids.

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to prepare

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will consume

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which will improve their health and reduce

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another significant reason behind

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physically active

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school

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hours a week for physical education in

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curriculum.

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will help to compact

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issue

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. In conclusion, There are

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increasing

obesity issues in

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the lack of physical exercise and

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foods. Awareness and allocation of

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for

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healthy

life style

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is paramount.