You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The table illustrates the proportion of monthly household income five European countries spend on food and drink, housing, clothing and entertainme Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. 

The table illustrates the proportion of monthly household income five European countries spend on food and drink, housing, clothing and entertainme 

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. 

Write at least 150 words.
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the tables
depicts
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the information about amount of household income which
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was
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were spend
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were spent
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on
food
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and services by five different
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European
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european
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countries after
analyzing
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, the amount of money
spend
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spent
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on
food
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by
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Turkey
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turkey
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had the highest number at about 36% followed by
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Spain
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spain
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and
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France
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france
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France
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which contain
the
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a
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ratio of 31% and 25% and
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Germany
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germany
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and
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uk
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UK
had the lowest
in
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number
whereas
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, the
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Uk
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UK
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system paid on housing consist of largest ratio compared to others at nearly 37%
while
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there was a negligible difference of 2% between
france
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and
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germany
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that fell out on
this
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category as the same pattern maintain between
turkey
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and
spain
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Spain
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furthermore
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, the money splash out on clothing was not as high as
food
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and drink.
Germany
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was consider
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was considered
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as
top
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the top
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contender teaming up with
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turkey
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reaching
to
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almost 15% to 12%
in contrast
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, the proportion of money on entertainment by
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Germany
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germany
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Germany
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was more than any other
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European
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european
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European
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country consisting of 19% chased by
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Spain
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spain
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Spain
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that
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maintain
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maintained
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second
scond
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second
position as
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France
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france
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and
uk
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get third and fourth spot in the entertainment category
overall
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, the highest number of visitors from
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turkey
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splurge on
food
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and drink
that
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apply
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contain
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contains
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the largest figure
whislt
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whilst
that
of
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individuals spend on housing in
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uk
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UK
contain most numbers of spending in total
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words food, turkey, germany, uk with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "ratio" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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