the chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The tables shows the percentage in each category of exports in 2016 compared to 2015
The bar chart illustrates the earnings of exports in one country in different categories during the two years of 2015 and 2016. The table presents the proportion
in
each label of exports in 2016 compared with the same categories in 2015.
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of
Overall
, both Petroleum products and engineered goods Linking Words
are
the Verb problem
have
top
highest earnings. Correct word choice
apply
Furthermore
, Linking Words
texitiles
showed a significant change in Correct your spelling
textiles
value
. Use synonyms
Additionally
, gems and jewellery are the only category that declined in Linking Words
its
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apply
value
.
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To begin
with, engineered goods Linking Words
considered
the highest in earnings in 2015 with over Add a missing verb
were considered
than
60 Change preposition
apply
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billions
and the Change to singular
billion
value
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raised
to be approximately 63 Add a missing verb
was raised
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billions
in 2016. Change to singular
billion
Moreover
, in 2015 Petroleum products Linking Words
value
was over 55 Use synonyms
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billions
and jumped to Change to singular
billion
be
more than 60 Unnecessary verb
apply
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billions
in 2016.
The considerable Change to singular
billion
raise
in Correct your spelling
rise
value
was in textiles with 15.24%. Use synonyms
However
, gems and jewellery decreased Linking Words
with
5.18% to be the only category that reduced in Change preposition
by
value
.Use synonyms
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