2.You recently discovered that there are plans to build a new airport in your area and you are not happy with it. Write a letter to the local authority. In your letter, oSay how you found out about the plans oExplain what problems your neighbourhood will face oSuggest some possible solutions to those problems.
Dear Sir/ Madam,
I am Tanveer Kaur, a local resident of Hamilton. I live in
west
5th Capitalize word
West
street
. I am writing Capitalize word
Street
this
letter to you in regards of
building of new Change preposition
to
airport
in my area
. I have read about this
news in the local newspaper . It was written in it that in the upcoming months
there are plans by Add a comma
months,
government
to build Add an article
the government
airport
in our Add an article
an airport
the airport
area
about which I am concerned. There will be many problems that our neighbourhood will face with this
development. Firstly
, there are many senior citizens that live in my area
and the noise from construction may effect
their sleeping schedule and health. Correct your spelling
affect
Secondly
, the area
in which new
Correct article usage
the new
airport
will be built is already very congested and populated. To build
a new Change the verb form
Building
airport
at that sight will lead to migration
of residents to Correct article usage
the migration
some
another location.
In my opinion, the Correct quantifier usage
apply
airport
should be built somewhere far from local
Add an article
the local
area
as well as
where the area
will be spacious and local residents will not get
affected much Verb problem
be
from
Change preposition
by
it's
construction. I hope that you will understand my concern and will look into Replace the word
its
this
matter soon.
Yours faithfully
TanveerSubmitted by tanveerkaur6703 on
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coherence cohesion
Ensure that your paragraphs are well-structured with a clear main idea in each. Avoid mixing different ideas within a single paragraph for better coherence.
coherence cohesion
Use a range of cohesive devices to better link your ideas and paragraphs. This includes transition words, synonyms, and pronouns to maintain a smooth flow of ideas.
task achievement
Be sure to address all three bullet points from the task in sufficient detail. Each point should be clearly developed with relevant arguments or examples.
task achievement
Maintain a formal tone appropriate for a letter to an authority. Avoid using contractions and informal language to keep the tone suitable for the context.
Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.