The graph below shows the different modes of transport used to travel to and from work in one European city in 1960, 1980 and 2000. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below.
The given graph demonstrates the various types of transport used for commuting to and from work in one European city in 1960, 1980 and 2000.
As a whole, buses were responsible for the highest proportion in 1960, with almost 40 per
cent
, but they fell to a low of 15 per Use synonyms
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in 2000. Use synonyms
Additionally
, the use of trains and tubes did not see many fluctuations, and they Linking Words
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an average of 20 per Correct pronoun usage
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According to
the data, using buses for transportation decreased sharply, and the percentage fell from 40 to 25 and 15 respectively through the years 1960, 1980, and 2000. Surprisingly, the usage of cars has only been 6 per Linking Words
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and rose dramatically to more than 20 per Remove the comma
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in 1980. Use synonyms
Finally
, it reached more than 35 per Linking Words
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in 2000. Use synonyms
In addition
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, only 20 per Linking Words
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of people were using trains during 1960, and Use synonyms
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amount had a small rise and reached its peak in 1980, with more than 20 per Linking Words
cent
. Use synonyms
Then
, it declined gradually till 2000. Linking Words
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but not least, tubes saw their zenith in 1960, with more than 25 per Linking Words
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and decreased steadily to 25 in 2000.Use synonyms
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