The graph below shows the different modes of transport used to travel to and from work in one European city in 1960, 1980 and 2000. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below.

The graph below shows the different modes of transport used to travel to and from work in one European city in 1960, 1980 and 2000.

Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below.
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The given graph demonstrates the various types of transport used for commuting to and from work in one European city in 1960, 1980 and 2000. As a whole, buses were responsible for the highest proportion in 1960, with almost 40 per
cent
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, but they fell to a low of 15 per
cent
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in 2000.
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, the use of trains and tubes did not see many fluctuations, and they
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an average of 20 per
cent
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.
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the data, using buses for transportation decreased sharply, and the percentage fell from 40 to 25 and 15 respectively through the years 1960, 1980, and 2000. Surprisingly, the usage of cars has only been 6 per
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in 1960
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and rose dramatically to more than 20 per
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in 1980.
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, it reached more than 35 per
cent
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in 2000.
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to
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, only 20 per
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of people were using trains during 1960, and
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amount had a small rise and reached its peak in 1980, with more than 20 per
cent
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.
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, it declined gradually till 2000.
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but not least, tubes saw their zenith in 1960, with more than 25 per
cent
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and decreased steadily to 25 in 2000.
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