Today, many people do not know their neighbors in large cities. What problems does this cause? What can be done about this?
In today's world, most people are oblivious to their
neighbors
in vast cities. Change the spelling
neighbours
This
essay
will discuss the main causes of it including the lack of effort and the difference in cultures, as well as
values. This
essay
will also
suggest solutions to these problems including, taking the initiative first
.
One of the problems is that,
individuals don'Remove the comma
apply
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make an effort to interact with their neighbors
Change the spelling
neighbours
due to
either, cultural differences or their values do not match. When having a good connection with someone, it's important to share the same interests along with
, blending each other's energy. For example
, When I first
shifted to Pakistan, I interacted with various people in my neighborhood but I only managed to have a strong connection with very few, which
we shared similar hobbies and personalities. The Correct pronoun usage
apply
neighbors
I didn't
try to talk to, often resulted in not being on friendly terms with them, thus
not interacting at all.
remedies for this
problem detailed above is to take the initiative first
if the other party is not taking the first
move then
you should try to talk to them foremost, Even though they aren't
trying at all. For instance
, In many cultures, they send food dishes as an act of kindness or as a courtesy which helps in developing a friendly relationship.
In conclusion, In a lot of cities or neighbors
, civilians don'Change the spelling
neighbours
t
try to get on good terms with their neighbors
. Change the spelling
neighbours
This
essay
discussed why the lack of effort is often caused by the dispute of interests and hobbies. This
essay
also
suggested that the solution to this
problem is to tackle the act yourself.Submitted by amnahazfar03 on
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