The diagram below shows the proposed changes to an office building. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
The given diagram illustrates how an office building is going to change in the future.
Overall
, the building will undergo a number of changes, including the expansion of one side of the building and significant changes inside the building with the addition of a number of new features.
According to
the plan, the current grass area
on the right of the building will be merged into the building. In the newly extended area
, there will be toilets and a coffee machine in the rear, and a meeting area
with chairs in the front. On the left side of the building, the grass area
will be replaced with an outdoor seating area
with chairs.
Moreover
, the four small buildings at the front will be split into two larger offices on both sides of the new entrance. At the back, the kitchen and canteen will be converted into offices, the storeroom during the past will stay unchanged.Submitted by phamnhung275 on
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words area with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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