In many countries, smoking is now illegal in public places. Many people believe that such a ban is justified. Do you agree or disagree?
Many nations have taken steps to ban smoking in
resturants
, hospitals, and parks. Correct your spelling
restaurants
This
essay agrees with that statement becasue
smoking can cause health issues Correct your spelling
because
to
non-Change preposition
for
smokers
, and it can also
influence other people especially
teenagers.
The primary reason why smoking should be illegal in public places is that Add the comma(s)
, especially
smokes
from Correct subject-verb agreement
smoke
cigrettes
can affect Correct your spelling
cigarettes
individuals
that
do not smoke. Correct pronoun usage
who
For example
, in India, many cases are reported in the hospital that are related to the
Correct article usage
apply
lungs
issues mainly Change the noun form
lung
due to
the inhalation of smokes
. Another issue relating to smoking Fix the agreement mistake
smoke
in
Change preposition
apply
outdoor
is that, it can have a huge influence on youngsters. Young Replace the word
outdoors
iindividuals
watch Correct your spelling
individuals
smokers
and they get
a tendency to smoke as well, which can damage their health from Verb problem
have
young
age. Add an article
a young
For instance
, in India, there are so
many teenagers who started smoking at the age of 14-15 Rephrase
apply
due to
the impact of adult smokers
. Subsequently
these young Add a comma
Subsequently,
individuals
have higher
chance Add an article
a higher
for
cancer Change preposition
of
realted
Correct your spelling
related
peoblem
in future.
Correct your spelling
problems
Finally
, individuals
who smoke in public leave behind ashes and rest
of the Correct article usage
the rest
cigrettes
in Correct your spelling
cigarettes
place
where they are smoking, which will litter that area. Add an article
a place
the place
Smokers
are not aware of how much waste they are leaving behind. Moreover
they are not aware of the impact they are causing to the environment. Add a comma
Moreover,
For example
, in America, smokers
throw away large amount
of Fix the agreement mistake
amounts
cigrette
particles after smoking. Correct your spelling
cigarette
cigarettes
Hence
, littering the place.
In conclusion, smoking should be illegal in outdoor areas becasue
it can affect other Correct your spelling
because
individuals
and it can have a huge impact of
young children.Change preposition
on
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