The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015.

The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015.
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The bar chart illustrates the
number
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of families in
United
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the United
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States by their yearly
income
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, which is represented in 5 different ranges of
income
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. There are
in
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3 reported years: 2007, 2011 and 2015.
Overall
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, the
number
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of
households
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that gain 50,000-74,999
dollars
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a
year
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remain
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unchanged in every reported
year
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. The quantity of families who earn less than 25,000
dollars
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and 25,000-49,999
dollars
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is slightly different
in
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every
year
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. It fluctuates a little in every range of
income
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. The
number
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of Families who acquire less than 25,000
dollars
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a
year
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was
initially
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at around 25
million
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. The portion of
this
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group has been less than
households
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who gained 25-49,999
dollars
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annually even at its peak. The
middle
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middle-income
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income
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range who earned 50,000-74,999
dollars
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a
year
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had no change in terms of the
quantity
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number
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of
households
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, which remained at approximately 21
million
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every
year
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. In 2007, the
number
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of
households
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who got paid
75,000-almost
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75,000- almost
100,000
dollars
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annually was almost at 15
million
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in 2007 and ended up at 15
million
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in
the
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2015.
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,
this
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number
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has never been more than the
number
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of
households
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who got paid 10 per cent or more of a
million
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. In the
last
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reported
year
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, the
income
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group
who
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that
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acquired the most had the highest
number
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compared to the other
income
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groups, and it,
furthermore
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, had the highest
number
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in all three reported years.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, income, households, dollars, year, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remain" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Economic landscape
  • Household income
  • Economic health
  • Income brackets
  • Trends
  • Inflation
  • Unemployment rates
  • Job market
  • Income disparity
  • Housing affordability
  • Access to education
  • Quality of life
  • Economic policies
  • Income inequality
  • Mitigating
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