The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015.

The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015.
The bar chart illustrates the
number
of families in
United
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the United
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States by their yearly
income
, which is represented in 5 different ranges of
income
. There are
in
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3 reported years: 2007, 2011 and 2015.
Overall
, the
number
of
households
that gain 50,000-74,999
dollars
a
year
remain
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unchanged in every reported
year
. The quantity of families who earn less than 25,000
dollars
and 25,000-49,999
dollars
is slightly different
in
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every
year
. It fluctuates a little in every range of
income
. The
number
of Families who acquire less than 25,000
dollars
a
year
was
initially
at around 25
million
. The portion of
this
group has been less than
households
who gained 25-49,999
dollars
annually even at its peak. The
middle
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middle-income
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income
range who earned 50,000-74,999
dollars
a
year
had no change in terms of the
quantity
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of
households
, which remained at approximately 21
million
every
year
. In 2007, the
number
of
households
who got paid
75,000-almost
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75,000- almost
100,000
dollars
annually was almost at 15
million
in 2007 and ended up at 15
million
in
the
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2015.
Nonetheless
,
this
number
has never been more than the
number
of
households
who got paid 10 per cent or more of a
million
. In the
last
reported
year
, the
income
group
who
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that
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acquired the most had the highest
number
compared to the other
income
groups, and it,
furthermore
, had the highest
number
in all three reported years.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, income, households, dollars, year, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remain" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Economic landscape
  • Household income
  • Economic health
  • Income brackets
  • Trends
  • Inflation
  • Unemployment rates
  • Job market
  • Income disparity
  • Housing affordability
  • Access to education
  • Quality of life
  • Economic policies
  • Income inequality
  • Mitigating
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