The chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in Newport city center from 2003-2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagram depicts the
number
of Use synonyms
incidents
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such
as Linking Words
burglary
, Use synonyms
car
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theft
, and robbery that occurred from 2003 to 2012. The Use synonyms
number
of robbed people was approximately steady every Use synonyms
year
and was the least case among all Use synonyms
cases
. The Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
burglary
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incidents
dropped significantly from 2004 to 2008 Use synonyms
while
the Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
car
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theft
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incidents
remained high and were the most violence-case from 2007 to 2012.
The deviation between robbery case and Use synonyms
car
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theft
case were stable Use synonyms
year
by Use synonyms
year
which were around 2000 Use synonyms
cases
. Meanwhile, the Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
burglary
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cases
in 2008 was one-third the Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
incidents
in 2003 and had an unstable fluctuation until 2012. Since there was a big drop in Use synonyms
burglary
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cases
, it was obvious that Use synonyms
car
Use synonyms
theft
Use synonyms
cases
excelled since 2007. The Use synonyms
number
of robbed people remained stable which was under 1000 Use synonyms
cases
every Use synonyms
year
. In 2012 Use synonyms
car
Use synonyms
theft
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cases
excelled, Use synonyms
while
Linking Words
burglary
Use synonyms
cases
got second place and robbery Use synonyms
cases
on Use synonyms
last
place and the Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
incidents
were 2400, 1400, and 600 respectively.Use synonyms
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