The chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in Newport city center from 2003-2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in Newport city center from 2003-2012. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagram depicts the
number
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of
incidents
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such
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as
burglary
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,
car
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theft
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, and robbery that occurred from 2003 to 2012. The
number
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of robbed people was approximately steady every
year
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and was the least case among all
cases
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. The
number
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of
burglary
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incidents
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dropped significantly from 2004 to 2008
while
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the
number
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of
car
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theft
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incidents
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remained high and were the most violence-case from 2007 to 2012. The deviation between robbery case and
car
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theft
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case were stable
year
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by
year
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which were around 2000
cases
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. Meanwhile, the
number
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of
burglary
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cases
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in 2008 was one-third the
number
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of
incidents
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in 2003 and had an unstable fluctuation until 2012. Since there was a big drop in
burglary
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cases
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, it was obvious that
car
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theft
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cases
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excelled since 2007. The
number
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of robbed people remained stable which was under 1000
cases
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every
year
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. In 2012
car
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theft
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cases
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excelled,
while
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burglary
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cases
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got second place and robbery
cases
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on
last
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place and the
number
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of
incidents
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were 2400, 1400, and 600 respectively.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, incidents, burglary, car, theft, year, cases with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 8 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stable" was used 2 times.
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