The chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in Newport city center from 2003-2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagram depicts the
number
of incidents
such
as burglary
, car
theft
, and robbery that occurred from 2003 to 2012. The number
of robbed people was approximately steady every year
and was the least case among all cases
. The number
of burglary
incidents
dropped significantly from 2004 to 2008 while
the number
of car
theft
incidents
remained high and were the most violence-case from 2007 to 2012.
The deviation between robbery case and car
theft
case were stable year
by year
which were around 2000 cases
. Meanwhile, the number
of burglary
cases
in 2008 was one-third the number
of incidents
in 2003 and had an unstable fluctuation until 2012. Since there was a big drop in burglary
cases
, it was obvious that car
theft
cases
excelled since 2007. The number
of robbed people remained stable which was under 1000 cases
every year
. In 2012 car
theft
cases
excelled, while
burglary
cases
got second place and robbery cases
on last
place and the number
of incidents
were 2400, 1400, and 600 respectively.Submitted by rose on
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