The table below shows social and economic indicators for four countries in 1994, according to United Nations statistics. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows social and economic indicators for four countries in 1994, according to United Nations statistics.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given table shows information about social and economic indicators of
countries
in 1994. Table consists four
countries
as columns:
Canada
,
Japan
,
Peru
and
Angola
; and four indicators as rows: Annual income per
person
(in US$), Life expectancy at birth, Daily calorie supply per
person
and Adult literacy rate (%). It can be seen seen that at well-developed
countries
such
as
Canada
and
Japan
, every number in their cells is higher in comparison with indexes of
Peru
and
Angola
. The annual income per
person
in
Canada
and
Japan
is US$11,000 and US$15,760 respectively,
while
in
Peru
this
slot is filled at US$160 and in
Angola
US$130. Life expentancy in developed
countries
stands at 76 and 78%,
while
in less developed
countries
- 51 and 47 respectively. Highest index of calorie that supply one
person
in one day shown at
Canada
3326 points,
Japan
has 2846,
Peru
- 1927 and 1749 at
Angola
. Adult literacy rate is very high at big
countries
- coming with 99%,
while
at
Peru
it consists 68% and extremely low percentage can be noticed at
Angola
- 34%.
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