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The table below shows social and economic indicators for four countries in 1994, according to United Nations statistics. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows social and economic indicators for four countries in 1994, according to United Nations statistics. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given table shows information about social and economic indicators of
countries
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 in 1994. Table consists four
countries
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 as columns:
Canada
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,
Japan
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,
Peru
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 and
Angola
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; and four indicators as rows: Annual income per
person
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(in US$), Life expectancy at birth, Daily calorie supply per
person
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 and Adult literacy rate (%). It can be seen seen that at well-developed
countries
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such
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 as
Canada
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 and
Japan
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, every number in their cells is higher in comparison with indexes of
Peru
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 and
Angola
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. The annual income per
person
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 in
Canada
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 and
Japan
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 is US$11,000 and US$15,760 respectively,
while
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 in
Peru
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this
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 slot is filled at US$160 and in
Angola
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 US$130. Life expentancy in developed
countries
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 stands at 76 and 78%,
while
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 in less developed
countries
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 - 51 and 47 respectively. Highest index of calorie that supply one
person
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 in one day shown at
Canada
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 3326 points,
Japan
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 has 2846,
Peru
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 - 1927 and 1749 at
Angola
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. Adult literacy rate is very high at big
countries
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 - coming with 99%,
while
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 at
Peru
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 it consists 68% and extremely low percentage can be noticed at
Angola
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 - 34%.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words countries, canada, japan, peru, angola, person with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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