The given maps compare the changes that took place at a city hospital in 2 different years,2007 and 2010

The given maps compare the changes that took place at a city hospital in 2 different years,2007 and 2010
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The diagram illustrates the modifications of roads that occurred in the City Hospital during the period from 2007 to 2010. Looking at it from all angles, it can be seen clearly that the
road
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to the hospital witnessed some changes that led to an improvement in conditions and the addition of new facilities.
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with, the first thing that hits the glance is that in 2007 there was only a straight
road
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to the hospital building with six bus stations,
whereas
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, in 2010, there was an addition of two roundabouts in the beginning and right in front of the clinic.
Secondly
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, there used to be a large car park area for both, the staff and the public, but three years later it was separated: a public parking zone was constructed on the east side with a small entrance on the ring
road
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,
while
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the staff car-park remained at the same place as it was in 2007. The third and
last
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difference is spotted in that in 2010 a new bus station on the west side of Hospital
Road
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was built.
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