The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework irhouseholds in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The charts show the difference in housework between the present and the past, from 1920 to 2019
year
.Overall
, it is clear that
doing housework and the amount of time per week in 1920 was hard and took a lot of time, therefore
with electrical applinces
, it made things easier for households until the number of Correct your spelling
appliances
hours
gradually decreased in 2019.
Looking at the details, in chart number of houses per week. In the first year
, started at 50 hours
working in seven days,meaning approximately 7 hours
a day.Moreover
, the working hours
declined to about 10 hours
in 2019.
By contrast
, in the chart the percentage of households was in 1920, the washing machine was considered the highest percentage among the other appliances, and it rose until 1960, moreover
, it climbed again by approximately five per cent
, then
it rose. However
, the refrigerator was not present at the beginning and gradually began to rise until it became 100 per cent
in 1980 and stabilized until the last
year
. Then
the vacuum cleaner started at 30 per cent
and also
soared. Gradually, it stabilized at 100 per cent
in 2000 until the last
year
.
Finally
, the more electrical appliances are available, the fewer the number of working hours
at home.Submitted by sesjej1330 on
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