the pie chart shows the percentage of persons arrestedin the five years ending 1994 and the bar chart shows the most recent reasons for arrest. summarize the information and make comparison. write at least 150 words

The pie chart illustrates

about

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the proportion of persons

arrestendin

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arrested

the

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five

years

ending 1994 and the bar chart

depicts

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the most reasons for arrest.

Overall

,

Males

was

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higher

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a higher

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proportion than

female

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females

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who

arrested

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were arrested

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in

five

years

. The following reasons are more dominated by men

are

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Drink

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driving, breach of order, theft, and other

reason

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. the largest

percentage

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are women and men

that

is

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public drinking and the

reason

for the small

percentage

is no answer with both the most dominating women. the

percentage

of

males

and

females

arrested in

five

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years

ending 1994 was 32% and 9% respectively, and the total

percentage

of

males

and

females

not arrested was 68% and 91%, respectively. the

percentage

of

males

arrested more than the

percentage

of

females

with

gap

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was 23%. there are seven

reason

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why

the

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males

and

females

arrests

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were arrests

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in

five

years

, The following reasons are more dominated by men are Drink driving, breach of

order

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the order

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, theft, and other

reason

with around 28%, 20% 15% and 20%, respectively

andrespon

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and respond

by

females

dominant

percentage

was public drinking,

assaultf

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assault

assaults

and no answer with approximately 40%, 20% and 8%, respectively.