The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table compares the number of fair trade
sales
for coffee
and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in different countries in Europe (UK, Switzerland, Denmark, Belgium, and Sweden), measured by millions of euros). Overall
, the sales
for the two commodities increased in the final year for all countries.
Regarding coffee
sales
, Switzerland had the highest revenue in coffee
in the 90s at 3 million
, then
the figure doubled in the 20s. Moreover
, 2004 witnessed a significant increase of
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in
coffee
sales
in the UK, with the proportion experiencing 18.5 million
growth. In contrast
, there was a slight rise for three other countries in which Belgium's income grew to about a million
, and 0.2 million
each for Denmark and Sweden.
Turning to banana turnover, Switzerland had the highest income throughout the period, growing from 15 million
to 47 million
. 4.5 million
rises experienced by the UK as the second country that makes more money on banana sales
, followed by Belgium proportion stood at 4 in 2004. Lastly
, Sweden and Denmark witnessed a moderate increase to just a million
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