The chart illustrates consumption of three kinds of fast food by teenagers in Mauritius from 1985 to 2015.

The chart illustrates consumption of three kinds of fast food by teenagers in Mauritius from 1985 to 2015.
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The line graph shows information about how many numbers of the three types of fast food (hamburgers, pizza and fried
chicken
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) were eaten by teenagers in Mauritian over 30
years
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30-year
period
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(1985-2015). In general, despite that the consumption of pizza became dominant at the beginning of the
period
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, hamburgers became the leader
at the end
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of the time.
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, it is worth noting that even eating of fried
chicken
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increased noticeably over the
period
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. In detail, the most common fast food among people was pizza eaten 60
times
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in 1985 despite
this
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figure witnessed a dramatic decrease to 10
times
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in 2015. Focusing both figures, namely hamburger and fried
chicken
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initial points represented 10 and 8
times
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respectively in 1985. Consumption of hamburger which was increased gradually to 70
times
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by Mauritian adults.
It is clear that
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this
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food became a leader in 2015.
Besides
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that how many
times
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of eating fried
chicken
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increased in 1985.
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,it came 20
times
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in 1995 and
then
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reached a high rise to 60
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in 2005.
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but not least,
this
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figure for fried
chicken
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virtually stood steady over the 5-year
period
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,only it formed a negligible go up to roughly 65
times
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in 2015
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Vocabulary: Replace the words chicken, period, times with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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