The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant.
The given line graph depicts the total
number
of
visitors
to an
island
in the Caribbean from 2010 to 2017.
Overall
, the total of tourists experienced an increase during the period from the two categories presented, which were
visitors
staying on cruises and staying on the
island
. Looking in more detail, in 2010, tourists staying on cruise ships recorded approximately 0.25
million
compared to 0.75
million
for those who stayed on the
island
. Following that, the
number
of travellers staying on the
island
was consistent
while
the other category, cruise
visitors
, witnessed a fluctuating pattern, upturned from 0.25 to 0.5 in 2011 and downturned to the starting
number
again in the next year.
However
, it is noticeable that from 2012 to 2017 travelling via cruises enlarged and reached its peak of 2
million
visitors
in the
last
period.
On the other hand
, the
number
of travellers living on a certain
island
,
also
surged remarkably from 0.75 to 1.5 between 2011 to 2012 before it remained the same for the next three years.
Although
the figure of
visitors
staying on the
island
was higher than those who preferred to stay on the cruise ships
initially
, there was a different pattern in which there was a slight fall from 2015 to 2016 to about 1,25
million
before it went back to 1.5
million
again
at the end
of the period.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, visitors, island, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stayed" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • trend
  • fluctuation
  • peak
  • trough
  • gradual increase
  • sharp decline
  • steady growth
  • plateau
  • seasonal variation
  • external influences
  • tourist influx
  • sustainable tourism
  • economic impact
  • hospitality industry
  • travel restrictions
  • visitor statistics
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