The chart below shows numbers of incidents and injuries per 100 million passenger miles travelled (PMT) by transportation type in 2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagram depicts the data of
incidents
and injuries
per 100 million passenger miles travelled (PMT) of five different means of transportation
in the year 2002.
Overall
, demand respond
was the Replace the word
response
transportation
with highest
Change the article
the highest
number
and the biggest difference in both incidents
and injuires
Correct your spelling
injuries
while
that of the commuter rail
' was the lowest and the smallest.
The demand respond
had a total of 225 Replace the word
response
incidents
and nearly 175 injuries
, which almost tripled all other types of transport. However
, the number
of injured people of this
type was fewer than the number
of incidents
by 50, biggest
amongst all five means of Correct article usage
the biggest
transportation
.
The second highest numbers of incident cases were the light rail
and the bus, both at 75. In contrast
, the rail
had a significantly smaller number
of injuries
at about 40 cases while
that of the bus was almost 60. Heavy rail
also
had the same number
of 40 injuries
as the light rail
but this
type only had 50 incidents
.
The transportation
mean with the lowest number
and the smallest difference in incidents
and injuries
was the commuter rail
with less than 30 cases in both numbers.Submitted by tieuvuphuonghoa on
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