The pie charts show the number of hours spent in a British university library by undergraduates, postgraduates and the total student population.
The pie charts below show how much time undergraduate and postgraduate
students
, as well as
the entire student body, spend in a British university library
.
Overall
, postgraduates tend to spend more time in the library
compared to undergraduates and other students
.
More than half of doctoral students
spend over 15 hours in the library
, while
only nine percent
of undergrads do the same.
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Furthermore
, just seventeen percent
of postgraduates spend one to seven hours in the Change the spelling
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library
, whereas
a hefty 63 percent
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undergraduate’s
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undergraduate
students
fall into this
category.
However
, over a quarter of all students
spend between 8 and 14 hours in the library
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