The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Noribton, and planned future developments of the site.

The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Noribton, and planned future developments of the site.
The provided maps compare the layout of the industrial area located in Noribton town at present with the plan for its proposed developments in the future. There will be a number of changes, leading to the emergence of a medical
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, a school, a playground and an array of shops among others. The most noticeable change suggested for the town of Norbiton is related to deindustrializing
this
area, which will be realized by replacing the current factories with residential buildings. The
access
road, which currently provides
access
only to the south and the east of the site will be expanded, so that the future residents will enjoy the
access
route to other directions,
such
as north and east. Its
further
expansions to the north will not only divide the riverbed in two
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but
also
the farmland which
is running
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along the river will be halved with
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new
access
via a fork passing by the river As a part of the proposed changes, all of the industrial buildings will be replaced by some underlying welfare amenities. A playground
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a school will be considered to be constructed on the east of the site with its
access
through the eastern road.
Furthermore
, a medical
center
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and some shops will be placed on the either northern diagonal sides of the new square which will be constructed on the southern road opposite the current main square.
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