The charts below show degrees granted in different fields at the National University in the years 1990, 2000, 2010.

The charts below show degrees granted in different fields at the National University in the years 1990, 2000, 2010.
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The following pie charts show the number of computer
science
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,
medicine
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, business and law fields granted by the National University in 1990, 2000 and 2010.
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the highest percentage of degrees accepted by the institution.Computer
science
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has shown an upward trend throughout these years. Meanwhile, in the next largest area of ​​business, the proportions were declining.
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,
medicine
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was the third largest and law the smallest,
they
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so they
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hesitated. In 1990,
computers
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computer
show examples
science
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and business were at 30% which both had 5 to 10% alterations in the successive years,
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The
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Computers
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computer science
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Science
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rate's
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increased to 25%
at the end
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of the period,
while
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business's rate decreased to 15% respectively. It can be seen that the forecasts for
Medicine
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and Law were the least significant, they both remained stable in 1990 and 2010 with margins for
Medicine
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at 25% and 15%
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for
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the
Laws
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law
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forecasts.
However
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, they had some outliers in 2000, with an
overall
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decline of 5
percent
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per cent
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. So both had the same rate reduction.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "overall".
Vocabulary: Replace the words science, medicine with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "show" in your introduction.
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