The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities in the last 4 weeks.
The bar chart compares the proportion of
coffee
and tea consumer's behaviour in five Australian cities.
Overall
, in those five different cities, the majority of citizens went to cafés
to enjoy coffee
or tea, except Adelaide. However
, the least of them bought fresh coffee
.
Turning first to Sydney and Melbourne, bought
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buying
coffee
and tea in cafés
was the majority of the population, over 60% compared to around 45% for bought
fresh and instant Wrong verb form
buying
coffee
. The lowest percentage was fresh coffee
consumption around 43% in Sydney and Melbourne.
Likewise
, people in Brisbane and Hobart also
preferred going to cafés
, over 55% and 60%. However
, the percentage of instant coffee
sold was also
significant, accounting for around 53% in Brisbane and almost 55% in Hobart.
In contrast
, the majority of people in Adelaide preferred to buy instant coffee
, accounting for almost 50%, slightly higher than going to cafés
around 48%. The proportion of people who bought fresh coffee
was the lowest at around 34%.Submitted by diyolory on
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