The pie chart illustrates several destinations of anthropology alumni from one university after they finished their bachelor degree and the table gives information on the payment of the anthropology graduates after working for 5 years.

The pie chart illustrates several destinations of anthropology alumni from one university after they finished their bachelor degree and the table gives information on the payment of the anthropology  graduates after working for 5 years.
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The pie chart depicts the destination of Anthropology graduates from one university after their degree. The table present the yearly income of antropologists after 5 years'
work
in three different type of employment: freelance consultants, government sector and private companies.
Overall
, most of the graduates
work
full-time. Their salary ranges varies considering the sector of employment but generally working for the state seems more profitable. For the Anthropology ex-alumni the employment rate is quite high, around 72% divided in: 52% of graduates are currently working full time, 15% are working part-time and 5% are working and attending postgrad studies. 8% of them decided to not
work
and continue their studies
while
only 12% are unemployed.
While
analizing the salaries of anthropologists afert 5 years of
work
experience, the government field is the more economically competitive. 50% of workers in
this
sector earn over $100.000 and only 5% are stuck with an yearly income between $25,000 and $49,999. The same goes for freelancers: 30% earn between $75,000 and $99,999 and 40% make more than $100,000.
On the other hand
, working for private companies does not seem as profitable, considering that the mayority of the workers in
this
field (35%) make between $50,000 - $74,000.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words work with synonyms.
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  • pie chart
  • bachelor's degree
  • anthropology alumni
  • employment sectors
  • salary ranges
  • academic roles
  • field research
  • public sector
  • non-profit organizations
  • private sector jobs
  • continuing education
  • job market trends
  • financial prospects
  • career progression
  • economic context
  • geographic location
  • cost of living
  • salary increases
  • experience
  • earning potential
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