You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic. The issue of gay marriage remains controversial. Some people think that this trend has adverse effects on the society while others believe that it is seen as a natural trend and right for people to choose this type of marriage. Should gay marriage be legal? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.
Marriage is
one
of the best Use synonyms
phase
of human life that Change to a plural noun
phases
everyone
wants to enjoy. Yet, Use synonyms
same
Add a hyphen
same-gender
gender
Use synonyms
marriages
always Use synonyms
remains
controversial. Some Change the verb form
remain
people
think that these Use synonyms
marriages
are not good to be in the society Use synonyms
where
others think it should be legal. I Correct word choice
whereas
am totally agree
with the Change the verb form
totally agree
later
statement. Let's discuss the reasons in the following paragraphs.
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latter
To begin
with first and the Linking Words
formost
reason is Correct your spelling
important
the
democracy. In a democratic country where all Correct article usage
apply
the
individuals have the Correct article usage
apply
right
to do whatever they want to, they should be given the Use synonyms
right
to marry whoever they want to. There should be freedom for gay Use synonyms
marriages
as well because transgender are paying Use synonyms
same
taxes Correct article usage
the same
like
other genders to Change preposition
as
government
and participate in Correct article usage
the government
the
society like others, Correct article usage
apply
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Correct word choice
so then
then
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they
there
must have a Correct pronoun usage
apply
right
to do a wedding with the person of their choice. Use synonyms
Moreover
, it is not the fault of gay Linking Words
people
if they belong to that Use synonyms
gender
as Use synonyms
the
God has created all Correct article usage
apply
the
genders and Correct article usage
apply
everyone
should respect Use synonyms
eachother
. Transgenders deserve the same respect Correct your spelling
each other
like
Change preposition
as
male
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the male
gender
and female Use synonyms
gender
. Use synonyms
According to
the law, we cannot discriminate Linking Words
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people
based on their nationality, Change preposition
against people
race
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or race
then
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one
don't have the authority to criticise them based on their Correct pronoun usage
we
gender
.
Moving Use synonyms
further
, gay Linking Words
marriages
are controversial because there is no law in Use synonyms
the
favour of these Correct article usage
apply
marriages
. If there Use synonyms
will be
a law to protect these Wrong verb form
is
people
, no Use synonyms
one
will stand Use synonyms
against
. As Correct pronoun usage
against it
everbody
Correct your spelling
everybody
know
, there are very less chances of a female or a male getting married to a transgender Change the verb form
knows
then
who will marry them? As a human, they Linking Words
also
want to be happy in life, they Linking Words
also
want someone to be there with them when they need Linking Words
one
and they have the Use synonyms
right
to go with the person who respects them, Use synonyms
understand
them. No Correct word choice
and understand
one
Use synonyms
have
the Change the verb form
has
right
to hurt or to stop anyone Use synonyms
for
being happy. To exemplify, Change preposition
from
according to
the survey taken by Alexander College Linking Words
student
, Fix the agreement mistake
students
depression
rate in lesbians is higher than the other genders and the reason behind Correct article usage
the depression
is
that they feel alone. Correct pronoun usage
this is
Thus
, it can be said that all these things lead Linking Words
them
to Correct pronoun usage
apply
be depressed to
a poor mental health. As a human, all should stand in their favour Replace the word
depression
where
they can marry anyone in the world.
Correct word choice
that
To conclude
, in a democratic country, Linking Words
everyone
Use synonyms
have
the Change the verb form
has
right
to be treated equally in all Use synonyms
the
fields. Correct article usage
apply
Everyone
Use synonyms
have
the Change the verb form
has
right
to be happy. Use synonyms
Thus
, Gay Linking Words
marriages
should be legal as these Use synonyms
people
Use synonyms
also
have the Linking Words
right
to choose their partners and to be happy with them.Use synonyms
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coherence cohesion
Ensure that you structure your essay with a clear introduction, at least two or three body paragraphs, and a conclusion. Your paragraphs should also have clear topic sentences.
coherence cohesion
Paragraphs must be well-developed with main ideas that are expanded upon with explanations and specific examples.
task achievement
Address the prompt fully by providing a balanced discussion of the topic, and make sure to answer every part of the question directly and clearly.
task achievement
Support your argument with specific evidence or examples. These can be drawn from your own experience or from general knowledge.
task achievement
Avoid irrelevant information or any examples that do not directly support your main points and argument.
coherence cohesion
To increase coherence, use a range of cohesive devices effectively, such as conjunctions, pronouns, and synonyms to refer back to previously mentioned ideas.
Word Count
IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 250 words in writing task 2. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.
A very long essay will not give you a higher band score.
Aim for between 260 to 290 words in writing task 2. This will ensure a concise essay and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 40 minutes to write the essay and you need around 10 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long essay in 30 minutes.