The diagram below shows the process of using water to produce electricity. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The picture shows the process where

water

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used

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is used

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to produce electrical power. The

proccess

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process

begins when seawater is heated by the sun and happening evaporation, appearing clouds in the sky.

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this

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these

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clouds

turns

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turn

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into rainy clouds and

gives

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give

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the rain. After, rain

gathered

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gathers

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reservoir

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the reservoir

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and through

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the dam

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dam

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dam,

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it goes to

turbine

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the turbine

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. In

turbine

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the turbine

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water

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pressure converts to electricity and it goes through high voltage cables to

transformer

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the transformer

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station. With the help of underground

cables

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cables,

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electricity goes to houses, factories and hospitals/schools. The

water

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the trubine

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trubine

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turbine

directed

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is directed

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to a pump where it will

returned

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return

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reservoir

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the reservoir

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again.

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, hydroelectric power is generated using

water

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from the sea and after

procuderes

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procedures

which consists of ten stages, which

at the end

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water

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returns to the reservoir.

shakhzodbek.bakhtiyorovMon Nov 20 2023

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words water with synonyms.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

125 words

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