The diagram shows the procedure for university entry for high school graduates. Write a report for a university or college lecturer describing the information.
The diagram illustrates the whole process of how to enter the university for
students
who already passed high school and looking for an undergraduate degree.
Overall
, it is clearly seen that there are more than five steps to complete the registration process and it takes about a month to reach the university.
To begin
with, every student who graduates from high school should fill out the application form which can be downloaded from the website, then
, they must send it to the admin. In this
part, the admin will make 2 decisions. The first one is rejection, for those who want to continue, they can apply to an alternative course and repeat the previous step. Otherwise
, students
who get the provisional acceptance, have to complete all the documents needed in 2 weeks.
Next,
once the admin already reviewed all the documents, the unconditional offer will be given. Furthermore
, the students
should accept this
offer if they want to select subjects they want to study and make a student registration. Finally
, after the long journey, the students
have officially entered the university.Submitted by zefanyagyu on
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